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Fantastic Ed. I saw my little dog in here. 😂The constant distractions and the constant "guard dog" role. There WERE a lot of smells in this story. Way to reinvigorate them for us, like a scratch and sniff card. You didn't miss a single character thread in here. Great job bringing things back together for Reena's last gasp. :) Woot!

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Even the dog has a hidden agenda! Hah!

And, I suppose, a belly full of weiners, now!

Trust a lil tap-dog to talk like Wolverine.

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Mar 15, 2023·edited Mar 15, 2023Liked by Ed Tankersley

Hahaha, that was very funny. Nicely done, Ed! What a great voice.

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Fun!!!! You took Bear away from me :-) -- but love this. Nicely done Ed.

The wieners, of course!!

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Mar 15, 2023Liked by Ed Tankersley

What fun! Glad to have this crazy story coming together in some fashion. Loved the flying wieners and flying Bear. Loved? the dog deciding whether to eat the burritos or the barf (gag!) But that's a dog for ya. Great writing and wonderful perspective for the penultimate conclusion.

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Omg, love it! When you connected the flying wieners to the flying “Bear,” my heart burst into a thousand hallelujahs

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😂😂😂 Ed, this was a crazy, awesome addition to the mix! You seriously killed it. The dog's personality is perfect.

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